Nowadays, childcare become major concern. In addition to that childcare is the probably most indispensable thing of the society for this all mothers and fathers should be required to take child care training course. This essay will delve deeper into matter further and reach to a logical conclusion in the end.
To begin with, when it comes to nursing a child no one can do superior than parent they can do it very well without any tips and training and it can be seen in many ways such as they treat and nourish there child with full of love and care as well as they pass on all good things and habit to there child and it really plays a crucial role in development of child and they do not learn these things from anywhere this is natural and god gift of nourishing there adolescent and there are many research which proves that a mother without any training take care very well from whom who takes training of it and instead of wasting time in any type of child caring course they should teach something new to there child.
On the hand hand, child training courses are to expensive not every couple can afford it without any good source source of income rather then wasting money on child training they should provide some more amenities to their adolescent.
In conclusion, I reckon there are not any training source which can teach to a mother how to take care of their child and in the end I totally disagree with suggestion of training to childcare center.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: much research; a good deal of research
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, then, well, i reckon, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53962264151 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25553707356 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520754716981 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.2975951904 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 220.800374899 49.4020404114 447% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 200.5 106.682146367 188% => OK
Words per sentence: 44.1666666667 20.7667163134 213% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.6666666667 7.06120827912 236% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288865887664 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163804582886 0.084324248473 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.160831617972 0.0667982634062 241% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19400191691 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0923115615737 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.0 13.0946893788 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.74 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.94 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.1190380762 194% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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