Some people believe that children s leisure activities must be educational otherwise they are a complete waste of time Do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience

There has been much discussion revolving around the issue of children should pay attention totally in the studies rather than creative works in the leisure. I totally disagree with this statement, further more in the essay I will explain the reasons.

To begin with, the children's should spend the time equally for creative works and study hours. For instance the students who participate in physical activities such as playing cricket, shuttle. Going for walk in the morning, this lead to increase the grasping power of the mind. When we compare to other student, who does not involved in outside task having less power(grasping).
Secondly, when people interacting with outside work will improve the leadership skills. What more, they have ability to tackle the people in the society, the speaking skills may improve when meeting the new people. For example, a successful person will have a good knowledge on people in the society and also speaking skills when we compare to un successful person.
In contrast, most of The people believe that, continues of study will improve the knowledge of the student and that leads to the first in education. not only in the studies, but also in the society. a well academic background person will treats as a king in the humankind.
in conclusion, the children s leisure activities must be education rather its loss of time, i do not believe that its a waste of time by engaging with physical activities

Votes
Average: 5.6 (2 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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... example, a successful person will have a good knowledge on people in the society and also speak...
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...t be education rather its loss of time, i do not believe that its a waste of time...
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...ime by engaging with physical activities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99588477366 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61215430231 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567901234568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5293028492 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3846153846 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6923076923 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159442415232 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507605216135 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687657287542 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955430214871 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0909431049549 0.056905535591 160% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...discussion revolving around the issue of children should pay attention totally in...
^^
Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...ncrease the grasping power of the mind. when we compares to other student, who does ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 290, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'compare'
Suggestion: compare
...the grasping power of the mind. when we compares to other student, who does not involved...
^^^^^^^^
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
...utside task having less powergrasping. secondly, when people interacting with outside w...
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Line 4, column 88, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: What
...ork will improve the leadership skills. what more, they have ability to tackle the p...
^^^^
Line 4, column 258, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[4]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good knowledge'.
Suggestion: good knowledge
... example, a successful person will have a good knowledge on people in the society and also speak...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 333, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'compare'
Suggestion: compare
...ociety and also speaking skills when we compares to un successful person. in contrast, ...
^^^^^^^^
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...n we compares to un successful person. in contrast, most of The people believe t...
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Suggestion:
...s to un successful person. in contrast, most of The people believe that, continu...
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Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Not
...d that leads to the first in education. not only in the studies, but also in the so...
^^^
Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: A
...n the studies, but also in the society. a well academic background person will tr...
^
Line 5, column 239, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'treat'
Suggestion: treat
... a well academic background person will treats as a king in the humankind. in conclus...
^^^^^^
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...ill treats as a king in the humankind. in conclusion, the children s leisure act...
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Line 6, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...umankind. in conclusion, the children s leisure activities must be education rat...
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Line 6, column 94, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t be education rather its loss of time, i do not believe that its a waste of time...
^
Line 6, column 116, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...its loss of time, i do not believe that its a waste of time by engaging with physic...
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Line 6, column 172, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ime by engaging with physical activities
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99588477366 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61215430231 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567901234568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5293028492 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3846153846 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6923076923 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159442415232 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507605216135 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687657287542 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955430214871 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0909431049549 0.056905535591 160% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.