Recently there are more gas stations being built as opposed to diesel ones in rural areas what are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend

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Recently there are more gas stations being built as opposed to diesel ones in rural areas .what are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

In yesteryears, the world has witnessed a change in numerous spheres. The souces. Of energy being used also changed. Nowadays, people are more interested in gas as a power source rather than diesel fuel, especially in countryside. In forthcoming paragraphs, I will discuss the pros and cons of this development.

To commence with, undoubtedly gas such as natural gas, CNG, and lpg is a clean and environmental friendly subsitute of the diesel. To elucidate, the emissions from vehicles that run on gas; contain less hazardous gases as compared to diesel. Moreover, gases as a fuel are cheaper than diesel and this is a major factor that works behind popularity of gas stations over diesel stations. In addition, gases are found in abundance while diesel is in scarcity. For example ,a report by united nations stated that world has only 72 million gallons of diesel left ,which may be lasts for 80 years only .

On the other hand ,replacing of diesel fuel has its own disadvantages .first of all ,a complete change in the existed engines to be needed ,which is not possible yet .secondly ,as many industries are solely dependent on diesel for their working ,hence they face difficulty in finding the fuel for them . additionally ,gases are also vulnerable to leakage and cause blasts ,so also become risky for living creatures .To illustrate ,a car in my hometown caught fire and exploded due to leakage of CNG ,resulted in human casualties.

To recapitulate , although an increase in gas stations in rural areas is good for environment and economically benefucial ,but it may cause plenty of problems to on-going vehicle and industries that inherited conventional technology.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in addition, such as, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09782608696 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88364564161 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648550724638 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.2181198082 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.25 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5833333333 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216155777712 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680458768259 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497121519228 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1208609625 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043200931686 0.056905535591 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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