The author posits that by replacing children's books section with a cafe Monarch Books can increase profits. To bolster his claims he has put forward few evidences. One of the them is as census data indicating a significant decline in the percentage of the population under age ten sales of children's books are likely to decline. Secondly, it can ward off competition with Book and Bean by adding instore cafe. In order to consider the argument viable author has to go through scrupulous discussions and answer the below three questions.
Firstly, the statistics of people in Collegeville drinking coffee is never mentioned. There might be chances that people in that particular area doesn't prefer coffee. There can also be chances of scarcity of coffee products and the staff need to be employed to serve and keep the coffee shop area clean. If minimal number of people visit the coffee section then the amount paid to the employees would be more than the profits they actually generate by initiating this new idea. If this is considered a viable fact then the argument would be undermined.
In addition, the percentage of children below 10 might decline. There could be chances that fifteen year old are still interested in this books. These books can also be used for gifting purpose. What if the people in this area buy books as gifts to distribute among orphanages? There will be lump sum profit generated instantly instead of waiting for a whole day for customers to arrive. Also, the new coffee shop requires modifications to be done to the shop along with furniture which would turn lead to loss.
Lastly, everybody has a different taste compared to other. For instance, people in Collegeville might prefer a serene environment while studying. If coffee shop is introduced in such place one can use phone which will disturb others while reading their book. Furthermore, children could come along with their parents causing noise which actually destroys a peaceful environment ideal for studying. Keeping all the factors and cost assumptions in mind the Monarch Books shop should take a step forward.
To conclude, the argument is flawed with various unwarranted assumptions and can be considered tenable only if author provides further evidence and answers to the above questions. At this point the argument is almost dubious and falls flat with all these misleading questions.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 23 15
No. of Words: 395 350
No. of Characters: 1958 1500
No. of Different Words: 221 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.458 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.957 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.57 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 140 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 105 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 70 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 43 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.174 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.148 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.652 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.265 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.265 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.064 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'them'?
Suggestion: the; them
...e has put forward few evidences. One of the them is as census data indicating a signific...
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Line 2, column 145, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ces that people in that particular area doesnt prefer coffee. There can also be chance...
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Line 2, column 304, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ve and keep the coffee shop area clean. If minimal number of people visit the coff...
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Line 2, column 478, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y generate by initiating this new idea. If this is considered a viable fact then t...
^^
Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ifteen year old are still interested in this books. These books can also be used for...
^^^^
Line 4, column 146, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...er a serene environment while studying. If coffee shop is introduced in such place...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, still, then, while, as to, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.6327345309 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.9520958084 139% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 28.8173652695 62% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 55.5748502994 92% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 16.3942115768 79% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1995.0 2260.96107784 88% => OK
No of words: 394.0 441.139720559 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06345177665 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.56307096286 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6343429321 2.78398813304 95% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 204.123752495 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553299492386 0.468620217663 118% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 705.55239521 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 19.7664670659 116% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.8473053892 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2021733256 57.8364921388 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7391304348 119.503703932 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1304347826 23.324526521 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91304347826 5.70786347227 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.67664670659 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152178122015 0.218282227539 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463249771989 0.0743258471296 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505956429913 0.0701772020484 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.08445295382 0.128457276422 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469364797217 0.0628817314937 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.3799401198 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.3550499002 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.197005988 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.5979740519 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.32208582834 98% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 98.500998004 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 12.3882235529 69% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.1389221557 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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