In modern era,individuals have the free to work and live anywhere in the globe because of the achievement of talking technology and transportation.I firmly opine that the merits they earn money and they do not work under any firm along clearly outweigh its demerits.
To commence with, when masses have free to work and live they going to the wrong path and they become ciminal with this development technology.To explain it,they find the new technology for communication to others nation people.With this ciminals share their ideas and it is very harmful for our country.They doing their work frequently.Thus,with this our nation humans and our country become dangerous from the criminals.
Further shifting towards the pros , with this new automation society can get earn more money.To explicate it,when all masses to free for choices their thinking and ideas then they develop the new games,software and many techniques.They earn more funds with their successfull work.For example,a survey was conducted by the japan company in 2018 found that 56% opened their own organisation with new techniques and they bought their own property for live.As a result,they become rich and they will saving funds for their bright future.
Furthermore,mostly public do not work under any person , so with this talking techniques and transportation they can open their own business.In other words,along techniques they can get new and fresh ideas then they made own project and thry do not need to work under any person or firm.For instance,a headline was published "THE MOSCOW TIMES" newspaper revealed that in france 78% society do not work under any organisation because of their sharp mind and new techniques .Hence,they become richer and control their own life in own way.
To conclude,although it is scary for all globe individuals yet it is useful for masses which thry get earn funds and they live their life with their own ideas , thinking and own way.
- The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink housing clothing and entertainment Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- The maps below show the changes in a town after a construction of a hydroelectric power dam 73
- Creative artist should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas in words pictures music or film in whichever way they wish There should be no government restrictions on what they do To what extent do you agree or disagree with this option 66
- Today there are a lot of websites providing news on the internet Some people believe that these websites will totally replace traditional newspapers and magazines To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in English who were able to speak other languages in addition to English in 200 and 2010 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , individuals
In modern era,individuals have the free to work and live anywhere...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 148, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...f talking technology and transportation.I firmly opine that the merits they earn ...
^
Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...iminal with this development technology.To explain it,they find the new technology...
^^
Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...his development technology.To explain it,they find the new technology for communicati...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 230, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: With
...r communication to others nation people.With this ciminals share their ideas and it ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 306, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
... and it is very harmful for our country.They doing their work frequently.Thus,with t...
^^^^
Line 3, column 339, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
...ountry.They doing their work frequently.Thus,with this our nation humans and our cou...
^^^^
Line 3, column 343, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , with
...ry.They doing their work frequently.Thus,with this our nation humans and our country ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...ecome dangerous from the criminals. Further shifting towards the pros , with this n...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 34, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s. Further shifting towards the pros , with this new automation society can ge...
^^
Line 5, column 94, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...omation society can get earn more money.To explicate it,when all masses to free fo...
^^
Line 5, column 109, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , when
... can get earn more money.To explicate it,when all masses to free for choices their th...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , software
...nd ideas then they develop the new games,software and many techniques.They earn more fund...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 232, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
... new games,software and many techniques.They earn more funds with their successfull ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 281, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
... more funds with their successfull work.For example,a survey was conducted by the j...
^^^
Line 5, column 292, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , a
... with their successfull work.For example,a survey was conducted by the japan compa...
^^
Line 5, column 454, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...they bought their own property for live.As a result,they become rich and they will...
^^
Line 5, column 465, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
... their own property for live.As a result,they become rich and they will saving funds ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 497, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'save'
Suggestion: save
...a result,they become rich and they will saving funds for their bright future. Furt...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , mostly
...for their bright future. Furthermore,mostly public do not work under any person , s...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 55, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...stly public do not work under any person , so with this talking techniques and tra...
^^
Line 7, column 142, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...tation they can open their own business.In other words,along techniques they can g...
^^
Line 7, column 156, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , along
...n open their own business.In other words,along techniques they can get new and fresh i...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 288, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...t need to work under any person or firm.For instance,a headline was published &apos...
^^^
Line 7, column 300, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , a
...rk under any person or firm.For instance,a headline was published 'THE MOSCOW...
^^
Line 7, column 482, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e of their sharp mind and new techniques .Hence,they become richer and control the...
^^
Line 7, column 484, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
...of their sharp mind and new techniques .Hence,they become richer and control their ow...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 489, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...eir sharp mind and new techniques .Hence,they become richer and control their own lif...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , although
...eir own life in own way. To conclude,although it is scary for all globe individuals y...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 159, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...hey live their life with their own ideas , thinking and own way.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26433121019 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03578553102 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512738853503 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 62.0 20.2975951904 305% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 144.532902828 49.4020404114 293% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 330.6 106.682146367 310% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 62.8 20.7667163134 302% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.8 7.06120827912 266% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139099638488 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949748818132 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590501238465 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0949748818132 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590501238465 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.7 13.0946893788 265% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.01 50.2224549098 34% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.3 11.3001002004 233% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.12 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.8 10.1190380762 265% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 10.7795591182 250% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.