The two pie charts compare six functions of energy used in an average Australian household and the portation of greenhouse gas produced by these energy consumption.
In Australian, household energy is mainly used for heating and water heating. While the greenhouse gas emitted by heating water and using other appliances occupies the largest proportion, heating produces a relatively small percentage of greenhouse gas.
Heating and water heating are by far the most popular ways of energy consumption, account for 42% and 30%, respectively. However, 32% of greenhouse gas is produced by heating water, compared to only 15% of heating. Figure for energy used in other appliances is only 15%, while the usage of these appliances generating 28% of carbon dioxide.
The percentages of enery use in refrigeration, lighting and cooling account for a small part, at 7%, 4% and 2%, respectively. Australian produce an average of 14% of greenhouse gas in using refrigeration. By contrast, the figures for cooling(3%) and lighting(8%) are below 10%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this energy' or 'these energies'?
Suggestion: this energy; these energies
...portation of greenhouse gas produced by these energy consumption. In Australian, househol...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37804878049 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07899660719 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536585365854 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.087684709 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.55555555556 5.23603664747 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297199559665 0.215688989381 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145658173533 0.103423049105 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117107839923 0.0843802449381 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221210317984 0.15604864568 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103277413716 0.0819641961636 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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