Instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it
Climate change, or global warming, is an amalgam of erratic shifts in nature’s course owing to the exploitation of humans. Although the problem has emerged for several decades, it has only taken a toll on the environment and the quality of our life recently. While multitudes of people suggest we learn to co-exist with this cataclysm, I believe we should crack it down for good.
Global warming posing grave ramifications is one of the reasons why this should be tackled. Conspicuously, the weather is getting more irresistible. A 2012 study found that the European suffered from temperature which was 4 C above the average. This has manifested the drastic change in weather patterns after hundreds of years of enduring the rapid furtherance attained in the modern world. Moreover, the uptick in Celsius not only can result in insomnia as it becomes too hot to feel somnolent but it also afflicts people with heat-related diseases- thousands of French citizens lost their lives due to them back then in 2012. Hence, the idea of cohabitation with global warming appears implausible since it jeopardizes our health.
Furthermore, climate change also puts animals, especially the useful ones, in peril of extinction. Geographic features have been tweaked and if they fail to adjust to the abrupt change, they perish. To illustrate, birds that are susceptible to heat are terrorized, which later encourages the use of pesticides in lieu of biological methods. In addition, if organisms want to dodge the plight, they relocate. People assume that the increase in temperature in Europe did somewhat correlate with the leaving of dolphins in Venice. Yet, these nomadic creatures can be poached in case animal smugglers scour them, which is another approach to extinction. In worse cases, animal distribution gets confused and their extinction can go unnoticed. Were we to let nature take its course in that manner, what we would lose is more than what we have achieved so far. Grappling with the issue is the only way to extenuate those imminent consequences.
To encapsulate, instead of lurking from directly facing climate change, we should battle with this problem so as to mitigate detrimental repercussions derived from it. Many resolutions have been voiced, namely using public transport, harnessing renewable sources, etc. Following those practical proposals to ameliorate our mother nature is better than staying benighted and paralyzed by the fact that we, humans, can become extinct by the thing we generated ourselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 108, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, then, while, as to, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2133.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 404.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2797029703 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85401406526 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 176.041082164 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641089108911 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 666.9 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2902452613 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.571428571 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2380952381 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.80952380952 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198574079127 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043873345069 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495888552404 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110547985554 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262910006913 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 78.4519038076 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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