In the present time entire world is suffering from addiction of smoking which leads towards critical death causing disease so that the banning of smoking stuffs like, Tobacco, cigarettes is pivotal step taken by government. I strongly agree with banning of smoking stuffs. This essay will delve deeper into matter further and reach to a logical conclusion in the end.
To begin with, smoking is injurious to mankind and it can be seen in various ways such as it causes many deadly disease like, cancer, heart disease, stroke, lung disease, and diabetes final destination of person who some is a painful death in early age a good illustration of this is tobacco products consist acetone along with tar to nicotine and carbon monoxide when individual inhales these substance then it directly affect the lung along with other crucial organs this how it ruin the smoker health in other words smoking is terrible to humans. Moreover, it not only affect smoker the people who were in touch with smoker sometimes it become threatening to them also for instance if person is smoking in public place then the people who were in surrounding they accidently pull on the reek thereby they also suffers even they do not smoke.
On the other hand, smoking has financial drawback predominantly population pay out large amount of money yearly on smoking which leaves direct impact of their financial status even its not worthy to put it in other way they expend money only purpose of their self satisfaction people are willing by wasting their money on decays
In conclusion, their are many loopholes of smoking and the only way to tackle this situation is put ban on smoking and stop the sale of smoking ingredients and most notably create programs who spread awareness regarding the drawbacks of smoking.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94701986755 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45360440042 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602649006623 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.2975951904 246% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 204.286903371 49.4020404114 414% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 249.0 106.682146367 233% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.3333333333 20.7667163134 242% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.1666666667 7.06120827912 300% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194546665039 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100912663081 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621452467064 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114188254175 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521185771621 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.0 13.0946893788 206% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 29.19 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 11.3001002004 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.32 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.1190380762 217% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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