some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn about current events however other believe that they can learn use better through other media discuss the both views and give your opinion
It is believed by few individuals that, it is the decent way to read news and learn about the current affairs through the newspapers whereas, other argue that, they can easily learn news, better through other media. this essay will intend to analyse both the views along with my perspective.
On the one hand, there are some reason why people think that newspapers are the best way to learn about the current affairs. The prominent one is that it is common and easier way as well as affordable. In other words, some individuals do not afford the electronic devices and they do not aware the latest technological gadgets. So that is why the mostly give first preference to newspapers as compared to other media. To epitome, it is proved in a survey that 65% people read newspaper in the whole world. As a result, newspaper are the decent method for individuals to learn more easily about the current events.
On the other hand, some individuals favour that social media is a better method to learn about the current affairs. To explain it, because in this competitive era, people do not have enough time for read the newspapers, because they were busy with their sedentary lifestyle. Through the social media they can get information in few moments. For instance, it is published in an article that, for the news and information, 90% people use social media. Hence it is the fastest and easiest way to obtain and learn the news as well as current events.
To recapitulate, although, newspaper is a common and ancient method of learn about the events. yet I believe that, social media is a equally important and valuable method because, individuals can easily know about the current affair in a few minutes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, so, well, whereas, for instance, as a result, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80677966102 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54836807259 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454237288136 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9242519885 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.457678944522 0.244688304435 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149613564655 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104943532712 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.289075895807 0.151304729494 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796922466465 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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