Slowly and steadily world has been more urban nowadays. The trend of migrating people would not halt and they move in the quest of employment, better standard of living and educational facilities .However this, tendency pose a threat to both cities and villages . This essay shall delve into prime issues and suggest some solution to come out of this problem
To pinpoint the paramount challenge on towns is burdened on resources and infrastructure .Apparently, which leads to rise many issues such as acceleration in prices of real estate and to fulfil their need people become stat doing land acquisition illegal encroachment and creation of slums . Moreover, limited availability of water pose a threat to hazardous diseases and would leads to many waterborne diseases. What is more , continuous influx of people escalate pollution, population . This trend can leave imprints on villages also such as it impact on traditional occupations like farming and agriculture as innumerable masses get migrated and loss in extensive labor and workforce usher this circumstance . As a consequence lands become predicted as barren in future .
There are colossal ways and combat the menacing effect of this situation such as authorities must provide job opportunities at the hamlet so that regional people have easy access of jobs at their own area . To epitomize it , factories should be opened like sugar mills, rice mills which absorb plethora of population regardless of their qualification because it is labor extensive service. As a result ,exodus of individuals stops . Another reinforcing, factor is provide effective linkage to city and village . Owing to fact it, would facilitate rural people to not to shift village for work so they can commute for work on daily basis . Thus, if above steps are taken appropriately , this problem can be address some solution .
In recapitulation , despite of copious challenge face by both urban and rural people but measures can make it plausible to dealt on priority basis especially by government then we can escape from its nasty effects.
- Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements What measures can be taken to protect them 84
- Some people think that cultural traditions will be destroyed if they are used as money making attractions aimed at tourists Others however believe that is the only way to save these traditions Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 89
- The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink housing clothing and entertainment 78
- Some people believe that they have right to keep all their earnings and can neglect taxes Do you agree or disagree with this 78
- The pie charts below shows the result of a survey of children 039 s activities The first chart shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in whereas the second chart shows the activities in which the girl participate 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, such as, as a result, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1741.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27575757576 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91465120686 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642424242424 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 92.3745978423 49.4020404114 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.357142857 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24764279197 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669507355631 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673763258803 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133765367886 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320978469663 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.