Some people believe that everyone has the right to receive university education, so the government should make it free to all people regardless of their financial background. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that government should pay tuition fees for students, no matter who they are or where they come from. In my opinion, I do not agree with this idea.
If the governments accepted the proposal to waive tuition fees for university students, they would face a heavy burden on national budgets. The government must spend an extra amount of money on maintaining learning facilities and employing qualified tutors, lecturers, and teachers each year. Thus, the authority must cut down spending on the necessary community services such as healthcare, public construction, and so forth. This means that government faces the dilemma of whether to increase taxes to ensure community service or decrease the quality of these services.
Apart from the practical concerns expressed above, I also believe that it also has a negative impact on students who attend college for free. First, the quality of college education will decrease, for example, if there are too many students on campus and classes are quite crowded, chances are that teachers will not be able to answer all of the questions properly. Second, for me, the best motivation is money, young students who have no longer worry about financial anxiety can easily be seduced by temptations. They take time to hand out and immerse themselves into parties with friends, and over time they get low scores at the university and do not want to study anymore. As a result, the country will deal with a shortage of high skilled workers in the future
In conclusion, although the selection of free university education brings many benefits to students who come from poor families, I personally believe that college education should not be free
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, thus, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06785714286 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63666988097 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628571428571 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.7351393147 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136396144687 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484250972221 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0303260918818 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0915611167762 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393729573468 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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