Some people think that resources should be spent on protecting wild animals, while others think those would be better used for the human population.
Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
In the modern world, overpopulation makes more consequences that damage to the natural environment. Some individuals say that assets should be allocated to reserve animals in the wild. However, others believe that those would be used for humans. In this essay, I will analyze both points of view and explain why I think that people and authorities should protect animals.
To begin with, lots of individuals disagree to provide money for conserving animals. Firstly, more people say that money can decide their living conditions and solve a wide range of problems in social life. For instance, when they have lots of money, they can improve their lives, they can choose high-quality hospitals for their family, better schools for their children, and cover all living expenses such as electricity and water bills. Secondly, many people believe that there are many animals which are dangerous to human life and resources. For instance, the locusts swarm in East Africa, they attack and destroy all fields of humans. And a lot of pandemics appear from animals such as covid-19, Ebola,...
On the other hand, animals should be protected. As animals play an important impact in the ecosystem. Nowadays, plenty of animals have the highest ability to be extinct despite they could survive from prehistoric. If they are extinct, the ecosystem will be unbalanced and we will lose several rare animals. Moreover, a huge number of animals have more benefits for humans. For instance, more scientists invent lots of vaccines or medicines which experiment with animals before using them on humans.
In conclusion, animals are very crucial in the ecosystem. We should protect animals to protect humans too.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 708, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...ear from animals such as covid-19, Ebola,... On the other hand, animals should ...
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Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ther hand, animals should be protected. As animals play an important impact in the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24175824176 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59761459896 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575091575092 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3502445079 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275320887195 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925401093345 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812957838478 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188201198862 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917912504642 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.52 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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