People today are spending more and more time outside of the home. What are the reasons for this trend? What effects is it having on individuals and society?
In this modern era, individuals are spending most of their time out of the home. The major reasons are long working hours and their own desire to achieve something extra-ordinary whereas these have detrimental impacts on their social life and health which I will discuss with suitable illustrations.
To initiate with, the primary reason is a long working hours at their work space. Due to inflation and competition in this world, people would like to work for longer hours than before. If they do not work for such a long time period, they may loose either their employment or could not fullfil compamies target which is set by companies. To do something unbelivable, is a another couse for this scenario. Individual has become self enthuast to achieve bigger and bigger target set by his own. Now these people are as motivated as flying baloon. For instance, MNCs give chance to everyone to proov themselves. That is why, people are with full of spirit to achieve something.
The first effect of this trend is no family bonding between immediate family members as earlier because in recent time, there is no enough time they have to discuss anyting in detail. Almost people spend 9 to 11 hours in a office. Another issue is related to their health which has become major problem for individuals and society. Owing to long working hours person forget to keep themselves fit and also do not take sufficient food which is rudimentary need for our health. As a long run, people have disease such like insomania, diabetes, cancer. For example, a big dreamer, person tends to tire very soon without doing any strenuous task. It is believed by himself that, the more he works, the more he earns. Ultimately, both individuals and society having negative impacts for their future.
In conclusion, although spending less time at home can give financial freedom, it ruins person’s social relationship and health which has elementary requirement for any human being.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 56, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'hour'?
Suggestion: hour
...h, the primary reason is a long working hours at their work space. Due to inflation a...
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Line 2, column 244, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[4]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...k for such a long time period, they may loose either their employment or could not fu...
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Line 2, column 371, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...panies. To do something unbelivable, is a another couse for this scenario. Indivi...
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Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...l. Almost people spend 9 to 11 hours in a office. Another issue is related to the...
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Line 3, column 354, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'hours'' or 'hour's'?
Suggestion: hours'; hour's
...uals and society. Owing to long working hours person forget to keep themselves fit an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96960486322 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58297865187 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589665653495 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.2684092879 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0526315789 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3157894737 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94736842105 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263585575433 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785173291623 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500334205324 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152412298863 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600009601699 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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