What is needed in order to become successful: talents one in born with or a desire to work hard? Which of these two views do you prefer?
It is undeniable that success is a thing that anyone would like to achieve in our lives. In my viewpoint, I prefer to the view that becoming a successful people need to a desire to work hard because it is one of the required qualities leading to each person's success.
To begin with, obtaining success is not easy because this process including challenges, blocks, and failures. So, if we do not have a hard-working quality, we can not get success in our field. Obviously, when we work hard, we can gain a large amount of knowledge and useful lessons. We learn many things consist of knowledge and soft skills. If having not hard-working quality, we are not furnished with intellect and competence. From this, we have difficulties in fulfilling tasks, assignments that we are in charge of them. Indeed, hard-working play a vital role in helping us achieve success.
Furthermore, a lazy person hardly ever would like to learn something because they simply would not like to do this. Therefore, it is so difficult for these people to get their success. No matter what they would like to achieve a simple accomplishment, they also get into trouble since they do not have basic knowledge and essential skills. On the other hand, hard-working is a good quality that helps us learn persistence when we encounter barriers in our lives and work. We do not easily give up before challenges and arising problems. From these failures, we can absorb valuable experiences and lessons for ourselves. Having talent is a luckiness but if we would like to achieve success and maintain them in long run, we acquire a hard-working attitude and make every effort day in day out. The more lessons we accumulate, the more success chances it comes with us.
In conclusion, it is my firm conviction, I have a preference in thinking that to become successful people needs to a desire to work hard because a hard-working quality brings us multiple advantages and required competence to go to success path.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 252, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... the required qualities leading to each persons success. To begin with, obtaining su...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, in my view, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8790560472 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85924259687 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519174041298 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0800836568 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8888888889 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274060172942 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936779251673 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831751843581 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209818488381 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637891150404 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.67 Out of 6
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