You work in an international company. Write a letter to the manager to give you some time off, in your letter include the following :
The reason why you need time off
When you need time off
Who should replace you when you are not around
Dear sir,
I am an employee of your company. This is to bring to your notice that I want to leave from my extra hours during work time to join my family function.
I have to go to my sister's birthday party at 6:00 pm at carnvilla hotel. Moreover, I have to go to purchase a gift for her. she is so excited about her birthday. I want to make her day so special as well as she told me that I have to come there as soon as earlier.
I can assure you that I would check my emails, perhaps reply to some of them and be available for emergency phone calls from the office. Once I complete my function and get back to the office, I would endeavor to come into the office earlier than usual and work Sundays in order to catch up on anything I had missed. I have already talked to Riya and she is ready to share some of the responsibilities during my absence.
I realise my temporary absence could be an inconvenience to you and the rest of the team, but I really need to take the leave to attend my family function.
I am looking forword to hearing from you and expecting your lind cooperation.
Yours sincerely,
Riddhi patel.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
... have to go to purchase a gift for her. she is so excited about her birthday. I wan...
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Line 4, column 373, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...alked to Riya and she is ready to share some of the responsibilities during my absence. I ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...he leave to attend my family function. I am looking forword to hearing from you ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, really, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.1935483871 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46672519038 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589861751152 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.331160021 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.8333333333 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133211799139 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460734683329 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515249609965 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867022163915 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514594752691 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.73 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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