Some scientist say that the world will be destroyed by human activities very soon to what extent do you agree or disagree.
Nowadays, technology has been arrived to a significant level, where it's leading to severe concequences. some researchers state that the world will be deminish by various mankind actions. I completely agree with the statement , which explained with suitable reasons for the cause.
There are several reasons through which humans are becoming the reason for the destroying of the world. Firstly, one of the main reason i would like to argue about is "Over population". As a result, it turns to deplition of natural resources, High cost of living, Pandemics and Epidemics. Hence, this uncontrolled population may even worse the situation of the world in future.
Secondly, i would like to focus on another reason is "deforestration". Currently most of the people are just cutting down the trees for their requirements. Further, it is resulting to extreme climate change, lack of oxygen levels in the environment, effect the life style of the human beings in many ways. Finally would like to impact on "pollution" caused by the people will definetly be the major cause in destroying the world, like Air pollution, Water pollution, Sound pollution.
On the other hand, I admit that the world will be destroyed with various human activities very soon if these extreme situations would not be controlled or regulated by the government. people in the world should feel responsible for the consequences and need to protect the nature.
In conclusion, Overpopulation, deforestration and pollution are the major activities by the human beings for the end of the world. these activities should be taken into consideration by the ruling government to secure the world environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41573033708 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.42532435825 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595505617978 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6293522586 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240227180767 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779482915388 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852246991223 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146582825726 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721655748041 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.