It would be wonderful if governments would offer free college and university education to all students, however, this is not possible for all governments.
For starters, not all governments can afford to give out free education to students. While the government might be able pay for professors salaries additional resources to run a university like research costs, electricity, or teaching material are costly; therefore, hindering the government from offering free education to every student. Along with that, there are certain governments in the world, like the African government, which can barely provide sufficient food for their people. It would seem preposterous if people were dying of hunger in Africa and the government was offering free education. Of course if the government is wealthy, like the American or Chinese governments, then free university or college education might not be impossible.
Additionally, offering free education to all students is an extreme. It would make sense that governments assist some students, through loans or aids, who are financially incapable of paying their own fees but, paying for students who can pay for themselves is economically devastating as these funds could be put to better use. For example, if a overpopulated country like India were to implement this recommendation then the government debt would increase tremendously and every year the government would suffer major losses financially because of the education sector. However, it would make sense for a less populated country like Singapore, who has a well developed economy and lower population, to give better assist to their students.
While the recommendation is extreme and not feasible for all governments, depending on the circumstances, the recommendation has some merit. Larger and more stable countries like the USA can afford to give free education to their citizens as the citizen pay tax to the country. However, due to globalization every year international students from around the world join American universities for education. If the recommendation were to be implemented these students would also have to be given free education, even though they are not part of the country and pay no tax to the country; which would hurt the country's economy.
As the claim stands, due to its extreme nature and broad perspective, I do not fully agree with the recommendation. There are a multitude of situations which can put many country's governments into crisis if the claim was implemented as it is.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 346, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 12.9106741573 194% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2136.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 398.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36683417085 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11001692075 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48743718593 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 674.1 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0377941661 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.5 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.875 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.21951772744 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226982056095 0.243740707755 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943137491647 0.0831039109588 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480853643649 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14730208542 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510304913117 0.0667264976115 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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