The bar chart below shows the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts in 2011 and 2021.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar chart illustrates, the statistics of Instagram accounts of five celebrities during the year 2011 to 2921. Units are measured in millions.
Overall, all five influencers have significant changes in their accounts over the given period. In 2010, The Rock account was the lowest rate while Christiano Ronaldo stand for the highest position among them in 2020.
From the beginning, Selena Gomez was the topper with about 125 million followers. Arena Grande and Christiano Ronaldo shared the second position with near 110million followers. Whereas, Instagram accounts of Kylie Jenner and The Rock was just below 110million in 2010.
On the other hand, after 10years all accounts had dramatic increases to over 200 million followers. Among the given accounts, Christiano Ronaldo shows above 300 million which is more than double when compared to 2010. In contrast, The Rock and Selena Gomez accounts were approximately 260 million and 240 million respectively when Grande and Jenner was just 200million at the end of the period.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-11-07 | ghazaleh Basiri | 78 | view |
- Some people say it is the government s responsibility to fund school buses while others think parents should be responsible for bringing their kids to school Discuss both views and give your own opinion 84
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- Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statements 73
- The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 w 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 208, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ollowers. Whereas, Instagram accounts of Kylie Jenner and The Rock was just below...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, whereas, while, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38036809816 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6173824051 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601226993865 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4773838915 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104107926264 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04467945148 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057428034366 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0764039118246 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520304249298 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.