the graph below gives information about united states goverment spending on researrch between 1980 and 2008

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the graph below gives information about united states goverment spending on researrch between 1980 and 2008

The line graph illustrates the amount of money used for research includes health, spaces, energy general science, and others by the United States government from 1980 to 2008. Units are measured in billion dollars.

Overall, the most significant amount of money was used for health research, and the least was general science.

From the beginning, the US government spend around 8 billion dollars on health research. While, after a slight reduction in 1984 the expenditure increased dramatically to about 23 billion dollars in 2004 before declining to approximately 18 billion dollars in 2008. Moreover, in 1980 only 3 billion dollars spent on the general science and in the following years, the graph shows a mild increase and remained steady from 2000 to 2008 with 5 billion dollars.

in 1980, the amount used for energy, space, and other research programs was around 5, 6, and 8 billion dollars respectively. Then the amount remained stable with 5 billion dollars for each research in the next eight years before climbing to around 8 billion dollars in 1996. Despite the spending on energy was decreased to 5 billion dollars in 2000, which rose to just over 7 billion dollars in 2008. Similarly, after 2004, the money for space energy escalated to just below 9 billion dollars compared to other research which plummeted to 5 billion dollars at the end of the period.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
...rom 1980 to 2008. Units are measured in billion dollars. Overall, the most significa...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...000 to 2008 with 5 billion dollars. in 1980, the amount used for energy, space...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, similarly, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1151.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04824561404 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58622838406 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508771929825 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 322.2 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0305333447 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.1 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11187261327 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595394147357 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500403554253 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085327629994 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072683741515 0.0819641961636 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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