Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In recent years, the trend has been changed towards countries developments. However, most of countries governing bodies care about their financial targets. While, a section of the society thought that other problems are on priority list such as environment and pollution. In the course of the essay I will describe the arguments of both sides.
On the one hand, governments take steps to secure financial level that creates impact on other things. If a country have more economic power then they produce jobs to their natives. In addition, payment of the jobs depend on country's economics. Due these facts governments makes way to install new factories that can produce products which export to other countries because of these exports income which help to government to give batter facilities to their nationals. For example, China and America are rich countries and able to give better schooling to children and make new health facilities for unhealthy people. However, other kind of contribution also necessary.
On the other hand, to make their country economically with factories, also need to take care about environment and pollution issues which have same level importance. Nowadays, diseases are normal to everyone because pollution and climate change create significant effect on over lives. Waste of factories major cause of main diseases. For Instance, underground water resources are badly effect from black water. When people are drink water they do not know about what kind of virus in that water.
In conclusion governments think about countries economy, while they also put under light other issues. I believe both are important to each country, however, we need to take steps worldwide.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the countries') or simply say ''most countries''.
Suggestion: most of the countries; most countries
...owards countries developments. However, most of countries governing bodies care about their finan...
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Line 2, column 104, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...el that creates impact on other things. If a country have more economic power then...
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Line 2, column 384, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'exports'' or 'export's'?
Suggestion: exports'; export's
...ort to other countries because of these exports income which help to government to give...
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Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ironment and pollution issues which have same level importance. Nowadays, disease...
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Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rces are badly effect from black water. When people are drink water they do not know...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 965.302439024 149% => OK
No of words: 271.0 196.424390244 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30258302583 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62452691001 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 106.607317073 155% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608856088561 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 283.868780488 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5974031797 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5294117647 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9411764706 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.70588235294 5.23603664747 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216894494855 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588958238612 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042456664418 0.0843802449381 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127159192319 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446853780393 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 40.7170731707 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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