Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more
important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
In recent years, the pollution has been increased that create impact on the environment. A section of society thought that the main issues for environment is that the reduction in some animals and trees however other gives countre argument that the environment is cause of these issues. In the course of the essay, I will discuss both sides point of view with my believe.
Nowadays, numerous kind of trees and animals are finish from the earth that help to continue the cycle of earth. These animals are the best source to reduce pollution on the earth while with unbalance between these kind of creatures which help to each other. For example, on the planet of earth many humen relise carbon dioxide and trees are produce Oxygen with help of Carbon dioxide. However, it is possible that other kind of species are design for tackle envionmental issues. some them eat palstic and other are breath with carban.
On the other hand, people argue that only humen make these issue with their harmful activities. Everyday people do number of thing that cuase problems. A century ago people do not fossil fuel which is main source of carbon in the air. Although, car and other product whcih run by fossil fuel create air polution. In addition, use of the plastic has been increased which is create crucial problem for sea and ocean life. If people reduce carban emmision and use plastic may be we would solve environment problem.
In conclusion, there are some species which help to solve the issues while humen plays essential role in polotion. I beleive that some of the creatures like tree help to reduce pollution while human create main. problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: belief
...iscuss both sides point of view with my believe. Nowadays, numerous kind of trees and...
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... the earth while with unbalance between these kind of creatures which help to each other. ...
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...thing that cuase problems. A century ago people do not fossil fuel which is main ...
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... reduce carban emmision and use plastic may be we would solve environment problem. I...
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...duce pollution while human create main. problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84397163121 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27625326073 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528368794326 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4306651893 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.375 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187920642458 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596564970359 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029197352657 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112431837436 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435867441881 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.