You celebrated your birthday with some friends last week in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed the evening very much.
Write a letter to the restaurant to thank them. Mention the food, service and the atmosphere. Also suggest any improvements to make things better.
You should write at least 150 words.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You do NOT need to write your own address.
Dear Sir,
I write to thank the management and staff of your restaurant for making my birthday event, which took place last week Saturday a fun for me and my friends. The choice of your restaurant was a last minute option for us and it was a huge surprise to have such success.
The food was so delicious that some of my friends even thought of packing some home.It also reminded us of the rubbish that we were served in a similar event last week, by one of the five star restaurants within the neighborhood.
When we talk about the food, we also talk about the beautiful ladies that served it...
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to have such a success.
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No. of Words: 284 200
Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 10
No. of Words: 284 200
No. of Characters: 1252 1000
No. of Different Words: 164 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.105 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.408 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.402 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 76 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 55 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 34 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 23 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.706 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.402 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.353 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.289 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.67 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.152 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 4