Obtaining a university degree is the most effective strategy to achieve success. Discussing this view
It is sometimes asserted that qualifications are attributable to success and that they are an essential aspect of hitting the high target in today's society, however, some believe that this is not true in some circumstances. Some cases demonstrate that they can achieve success in their careers just via their experiments and social skills. I agree with both points of view because everything has two sides: objective and negative. Both arguments will be examined in this essay.
On the one hand, some argue that a university education is critical for success. In general, people who graduated with a good degree have a better chance of finding work than those who did not. A good education is a deciding factor that allows you to compete with others for great positions. The more education we have, the more options we have, so university degrees play a vital role in our lives. Additionally, in some fields, persons must have extensive knowledge to pursue this major. For example, if you want to be a doctor, you must have a thorough understanding of the medical sector, which can only be obtained through university education. This illustrates that a high degree of education is the first and most important prerequisite for gaining a good career.
Despite the aforementioned arguments, I believe that some individuals can achieve success without a university degree. a typical example is Bill Gates, an American billionaire who succeeded in his career although he dropped out of college. Another example is that many young people nowadays can earn a lot of money while not having studied extensively. Thanks to the development of information technology, the job market has become more open. There are many careers that do not require a professional degree but still earn a high income.
In conclusion, each option has its own right ideas, showing that a university degree is not the sole road to success. However, in my opinion, teenagers should achieve higher education to prepare better for their future jobs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, in general, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21100917431 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06746884136 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593272171254 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3114375627 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220773608336 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668339572562 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478473005789 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122896495106 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257141742154 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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