Why go to university?
Along with the fast speed of social development, it is undeniable that education is one of the most significant extents which attract people’s attention. Everybody is supported to go to university in order to achieve their goals in life. However, some people still wonder why we have to go to university. In my point of view, people go to university because of three reasons regarding jobs, living conditions and relations.
First of all, nowadays, an academic certificate is always required when we apply for a job. It reflects that we were trained to have professional skills to meet the requirements of the firms. For that reason, more employers will be attracted and persuaded to recruit us. As a result, it is easier for us to find a job which is better and more stable than temporary jobs. To achieve an academic certificate, we have to go to university.
Secondly, it is my firm conviction that we can raise our living conditions thanks to university. By getting a stable job, we can afford to find a good place with a comfortable and secure environment to live. Furthermore, we can afford to pay for the needs in our daily life. These things affect our mental and physical health in a positive way.
Finally, going to university paves the way for our career in the future. The reason is that we have a lot of chances to make friends with people who are in our class or even people from other ologies. In particular, we can meet and learn from many professors who will help us in our studies. The relations between us and them can support us in the future like finding a job, finding partners, etc.
To sum up, it is worthwhile for us to go to university. It will provide us with some advantages concerning jobs, living conditions and relations. By getting a certificate from university, our life can be more comfortable and our dreams can become a reality.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, while, in particular, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68693009119 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8260351424 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51367781155 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.0442820646 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.1 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.45 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158667812367 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590977255427 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954732316029 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993086897096 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117835201492 0.056905535591 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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