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The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation and not competition

Humans, like various other animals, are social beings. The direct result of this behaviour is the existence of civilization as we see today. Humans have been fairly successful in building things for the betterment of human civilization and the distinction is clearly visible when we compare the world existing in last century with the world existing in present time. All this has been possible only because of humans cooperating with each other. Consider a building. A team of people unite to construct it. Each person is doing a different job. We have engineers, architects, masons and others all cooperating with each other to achieve their only single objective.Similarly, consider any large organization. Let's observe the beginnings of Google. If Susan Wozcicinky wouldn't have joined as a marketing manager to cooperate with Larry and Sergey at the right time, it might not have reached the level of success it has reached now. It may be noted that Susan had initially only rented her garage to the cofounders but got interested seeing their work and hence decided to join.
Great things have seldom been done by lone wolves.Team work and coopeartion is the key. However, humans by nature are competetive.They have been competing against one another for basic needs like food and shelter. They have fought wars to capture land. Inthe present context, people are competing with each other for authority. This nature of humans will remain and it should remain. The competetive spirit only needs channelization because it is supposed to bring out the bestout of people. Burning desire generated due to competition compels people to put extra effort. However, it is to be noted that people in a unit should not compete against one another to fulfil their personal aspirations which may be very different from the collective goals of the unit.
Hence to work in an organized society, it can be said that each individual with his unique talents must cooperate with another individual having some other talent. We also need to keep in mind that each person is appreciated for playing their part. This in turn will increase further cooperation.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, similarly, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 352.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08806818182 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76798302904 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573863636364 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.2466210342 60.3974514979 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4090909091 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22727272727 5.21951772744 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100632942016 0.243740707755 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0303891031877 0.0831039109588 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407401531475 0.0758088955206 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717057215072 0.150359130593 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0153374098388 0.0667264976115 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, similarly, so

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