In some cities of the world, cars are replacing bicycles. However, in some other cities, bicycles are replacing cars. What are the reasons for these two developments? In your opinion, which one is better.
A few decades ago, bicycles were one of the primary modes of transportation. However, with the introduction of cars, the use of bicycles has declined. In my opinion, I prefer to live in a country where bicycles replace cars. I think the use of bicycles instead of cars brings a lot of benefits to people and the earth. So, my following essay will mention the benefits of using bicycles.
First of all, using bicycles to move can improve your mental health. Cycling can help with stress, despair, and anxiety. Concentrating on the road while riding improves attention and awareness of the current moment. This may assist in diverting your attention away from the mental chatter of your day. If you're feeling sluggish or listless, go on your bike and ride for at least 10 minutes. Endorphins are released during exercise, which helps you feel better while decreasing stress levels. When you make cycling a regular part of your life, you may feel more confident and pleased.
Secondly, cycling not only helps you to improve your mental health but also improves your physical health. Cycling habitually, especially at a high intensity, helps you to reduce body fat, promoting optimal weight management. You'll also boost your metabolism and muscle mass, allowing you to burn more calories even when you're not exercising. In addition, if you have cancer or are recovering from cancer, cycling is an excellent supplement to your treatment strategy. Cycling can help you stay slim and healthy, which may lower your risk of some cancers, such as breast cancer.
Finally, if people try to use bicycles instead of cars, it will bring many eco-friendly benefits. When you can, ride your bike to reduce your carbon impact. Cycling is an excellent alternative to modes of transportation that require long periods of waiting in traffic. It's particularly beneficial when you're heading somewhere that's a little too far to walk, but you don't want to drive. The fact that you won't have to struggle for a parking spot in congested places is a plus.
In short, I think replacing cars with bicycles is a great idea because it brings many benefits to not only people but also the earth. Therefore, I hope more and more cities follow this development.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1859.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94414893617 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63733252758 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561170212766 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.8587638158 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.4583333333 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.79166666667 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192965289175 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545695993168 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462405583091 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113633274553 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473862797624 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.