Some people think that money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness
Do you think people can be happy without much money?
What other factors contribute towards happiness?
Nowadays, it is easy to realize that advertisements are becoming common in our daily life. we can see advertisements almost everything from television to billboards on the streets. these ads are an effective way to promote a product to consumers. however, there are some negative things from ads besides its benefits.
The first thing which we can clearly see that it makes us annoyed sometimes. there are a lot of commercials which appear on tv. it often
shows
during the middle a tv
show
or a film. even though it just takes about some minutes, it still can be a bothersome time. While we are watching a
show
, a commercial suddenly occurs can interrupt our feeling and get our mood down. Furthermore, the content of that ads may be rather boring, silly or even delicate. it not only gets us embarrassed but also is not suitable for watching, especially for the children.
The other problem comes from advertisements that they can confuse us about the products. some ads often exaggerate about the quality of a stuff. For example, a commercial on tv may talk and emphasize constantly on taste of a drink, although it is not really delicious as they told. it can make consumers spend money on unexpected goods. beside that, there are many advertisements about the same product. we see all of these ads and they
show
us some equivalent things about quality as well as price. This will take us some time to decide which one we should buy after thinking carefully. If there is just some ads about a certain product, it will be easier to make a decision.
advertisements may bring us some benefits for having a lot of choices and comparing prices. however, because it is too much in our life, it can lead to several problems outweigh its advantages. Therefore, the companies should think seriously about the way their products are introduced to people in order to promote in an effective way.
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- Advertisements are becoming more more common in everyday life Is it a positive or negative development 11
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- Write a narrative essay about someone or something that influenced you 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ntroduced to people in order to promote in an effective way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, really, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79939209726 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78240734502 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547112462006 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.4913822778 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.7727272727 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9545454545 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116321065462 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0341419088661 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322026894367 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0514273450615 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350713231782 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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