Write a narrative essay about someone or something that influenced you.
Maybe we all have some events which affect our life a lot. These things can make us learn many lessons and become better. To me, that thing is the time when I started to study at university in Cần Thơ city.
When I graduated from high school and begin to study in a place outside my hometown, it was really the special time. I had never lived alone without my parents for a long time like this time before. The first day I stayed in a dormitory room in Cần Thơ University, almost everything is strange to me. I need to live with 5 people whom I did not know. Honestly, I am not good at talking to strangers, so it is rather confusing during some first days. Beside this, I also have to get familiar with the food in the canteen. I do not think this food is really good, but I have to eat it because of the convenience. Going out to have lunch after morning classes is not a good idea for me. In addition, the ways in Cần Thơ city is another problem. I got lost many times during the first time in this city. Google Map did not work well as I expected. It took me much time to travel through the ways before arriving a place. Above all, the biggest challenge here is that I must do everything by myself. When my parents cannot stay with me always, I must make decisions on my own as well as find the ways to solve my problems. This sudden change causes me many difficulties. I ought to think carefully about a thing so that I can find a solution as good as possible.
However, this stage also taught me some lessons which had changed my mind. Because of living with strangers, I know how to live properly and get on well with my roommates. After a few first days, we became friends quickly and helped each other a lot since then. Also, I gradually became more confident. I can talk to stranger to ask something or make friends with many people at the first met. Lastly, I can handle my problems by thinking thoroughly about them. Receiving advice from the others is another important thing which I had learned through this stage.
There are many special periods in my life but the first time in an unfamiliar place like that definitely is the most important one. Through these days, I become better than I can expect. Even though the difficulties struggled me much, they also taught me a lot. Thanks to this experience, I learned how to improve myself from the new things.
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- Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life Is this a positive or negative development 60
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- Advertisements are becoming more more common in everyday life Is it a positive or negative development 11
- Write a narrative essay about someone or something that influenced you 11
- Some people think that money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness Do you think people can be happy without much money What other factors contribute towards happiness 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, honestly, however, if, lastly, may, really, so, then, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 68.0 5.60731707317 1213% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 33.7804878049 189% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1947.0 965.302439024 202% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 447.0 196.424390244 228% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35570469799 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 3.73543355544 123% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34842647897 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 106.607317073 216% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514541387025 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 604.8 283.868780488 213% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 1.53170731707 1436% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 8.94146341463 336% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.6802900236 43.030603864 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.9 112.824112599 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.9 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36666666667 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 3.70975609756 404% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 1.13902439024 790% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0189336624018 0.215688989381 9% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00575370730471 0.103423049105 6% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0173209623701 0.0843802449381 21% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0115324327464 0.15604864568 7% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.014704250112 0.0819641961636 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 13.2329268293 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 11.4140731707 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 40.7170731707 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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