Does Art give our lives meaning and purpose or is it merely a distraction from real life?
How do you feel about this?
These days, more and more people looking for diverse kinds of Art and enjoying this moment. Some people believe that Art gives some worthwhile lesson to our life, while others think that it is simply a way to escape reality. To my view, Art is one of the effective ways to cure oneself and convey some particular meaningful purposes.
Art is more than for entertainment purposes. Thanks to art, people can have a chance to improve the true, the good, and the beautiful value within themselves. It is a position of Art to arouse emotions inside people and to let them learn about numerous things in life through Art. When we enjoy a movie, for example, we are able to distinguish between good manners and bad manners. From that point, we learn to avoid being bad and try to be decent people.
Some argue that art is a distraction from real life. However, one of the main functions of Art is to educate people and allow them to acquire some valuable lessons through art. Any road in life is hard and it needs our hard-working to get through it. Art teaches us that every adversity in life has its own set of solutions. . Every moment in life is valuable and all we can do is just enjoy every moment in life and keep a positive attitude.
In conclusion, art serves a purpose and is intended for people. It is, in my opinion, good medicine for human souls, which distinguishes us from animals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54761904762 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46009251447 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563492063492 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4868940338 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.4 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73333333333 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221380309024 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080650068768 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685046277309 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125870521233 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450415113246 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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