Some educationalists argue that non-exam , arts-based subjects , such as music , drama, art and craft , should be compulsory in the secondary –school curriculum. They believe that activities such as these can improve overall academic performance . to what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is hard to overstate the importance of schooling. Therefore, what should and should not be taught at school is constantly a topic of public interest. It is believed by some educationalists that the obligatory secondary-school discipline should encompass a range of non-exam and art-based subjects such as music, drama, art and craft because they contend that these courses can enhance overall academic performance. I advocate this viewpoint for reasons provided below.
First, there is no denying that math, physic, science and other academic subjects are of great significance. Although it could be said that this subjects lay the solid foundation for students to gain and attain a wealth of fundamental knowledge, which plays a pivotal role in their future, art-related subjects, however, cannot be downplayed. A myriad of studies have suggested that these programs affords students the scope to promote both social and cognitive skills. In other words, while drama and music, for instance, stimulate youngsters to strengthen their communication skills, craft and art foster their creativity and imagination, by extension, these virtues indirectly boost the overall academic accomplishment
Another legitimate rationale is that these non-academic subjects would prove conducive to absorbing more effortlessly tedious courses such as history or literature. In lieu of conventional study methods, impersonating historical figures in drama classes or performing traditional songs enable students to naturally and efficiently be receptive to these dreary knowledge. Furthermore, students can derive great therapeutic pleasure from them, especially young talents possessing artistic qualities. These activities are a fertile ground for individuals being endowed with an aptitude for art to unlock their full potential. After all, these particular programs would reduce a strain and pressure which other intense academic ones put on youngsters, thereby facilitating a profound and thorough understanding of all facets of their schooling.
In conclusion, the benefits that art-based curriculum confers on pupils in secondary level are unequivocally unquestionable. It behooves school to allocate more funds for these kinds of course in order to create an intriguing learning environment for students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, then, therefore, while, after all, for instance, in conclusion, of course, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1971.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.88358208955 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17256562489 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64776119403 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.5043652806 49.4020404114 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.785714286 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369295075934 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10418508523 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134472081632 0.0667982634062 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222200625103 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134554236229 0.056905535591 236% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.12 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.0 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 78.4519038076 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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