The worldwide population of children aged 15 and younger is rising. What are advantages and disadvantages for countries with this kind of growth?
In recent years, many countries have witnessed the enhancement of the young population. This phenomenon may benefit the nation someway; however, there are still some drawbacks when the number of children increases.
It is manifest that children are considered as the future of a nation. That the population of youngsters aged 15 or less is rising will provide the society with abundant labour resources in the future. Moreover, this workforce is energetic and dynamic because they can easily adapt to the changes and acquire the development of technology. Therefore, a country with a young population will attract more investment from multinational corporations rather than the others. Take China as an example, this country possesses an enormous population and most of them are between 15 and 64 years old. This is a privilege for China to compete with other countries to get the foreign investment. As a result, the increase in young people can boost up the country’s economy.
However, nations have to tackle some issues when the number of children goes up. First and foremost, more population results in the enhancement of demand for food. If the number of young people does not stop rising, society may cope with the lack of food. Thus, a country needs to improve agricultural production to supply enough ration to its residents. Additionally, governments must enforce accurate policies to upgrade the infrastructure and facilities for education and healthcare service. This process may cost a gigantic amount of money, and it also affects the residents’ life.
In conclusion, although the broad young population can bring a country some disadvantages, this kind of growth leads to long-term economic benefits in a country. And the government should take action to minimize the drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, in conclusion, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32517482517 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94541146144 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.497719314 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.5882352941 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8235294118 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293711311509 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784131507218 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576626995052 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157034977359 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742284494425 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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