A countless number of animals have been heading to extinction for billions of years of Earth formation. This appears to be an unavoidable process that can be irreversible. In my opinion, I agree with this statement that people should little pose any interference in the extinction of some animal species.
On the one hand, because of the population explosion across the globe, the appearance of human beings has been found in almost every corner of the world. This has led to deforestation to establish residence zones, buildings... Therefore, the evacuation of wild animals into deeper primary forests for survival has risen. Moreover, several animals have become extinct as a result of endless hunting occasions by humans. This should be considered as one of the human-induced activities, driving a number of animal species to extinction.
On the other hand, extinction of animal species results from suddenly natural changes. One of the most notorious disaster events that nearly killed all dinosaurs on Earth is that a meteor, the size of a mountain, slammed into Earth 66 million years ago, filling the atmosphere with gas, dust, and debris that drastically altered the climate. The collision generated a massive wave of shockwave, triggering eruption of thousands of volcanoes all over the world. Their extensive ashes had covered the sky for decades, preventing sunlight from entering the earth and leading to unprecedented decreasing temperatures. Therefore, billions of Cretaceous inhabitants little held the capacity to adapt to this change and went to extinction. Human beings in this kind of event have no power to protect these animals.
In conclusion, I reaffirm that although individuals have driven several animals to disappearance, extinction of animals plays an important role in nature. There is no reason why people should intervene to stop this from taking place.
- Some people think that countryside life is healthier while others believe that city is better in order to have a healthy lifestyle Discuss both views with your own perception 67
- Scientists and tourists can travel to remote natural environments such as the South Pole Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages 78
- You have had a class discussion on the importance of exercise Now your teacher has asked you to write a composition answering the following question Exercise is important for our health but are there things that are more important Write your composition 89
- Around the world it is likely that more adults will work from home and more children will study from home as computer technology becomes cheaper and more accessible Do you think it is a negative or a positive development 84
- Some people store personal and private information online including banking contacts and addresses Is it a positive or negative trend 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3569023569 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94753790215 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3567456394 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4375 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5625 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302879928553 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928666426707 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765688542335 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186182533428 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432625479182 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.