Young people should spend more time on cultural activities such as music and theater and less time on sport. HOw far do you agree with this statement?
It is said that young people should spend more time on cultural activities as music and theater and less time on sports. I believe that each of them has their taste of using their time and it depends on their hobbies.
Some people who are not interested in playing sports will find it tiring and boring when they join in sports activities. They may prefer sitting in the library to read books, or they find it is more exciting to participate in a music club. Sports can make people more healthy, but it is sometimes not for all people.
On the other hand, cultural activities are necessary for young people as well. They need music to relax to release the stress of studying while the others are crazy about cinemas or theaters. Cultural activities are for people who are both active and passive. For instance, a footballer is good at sports activities, and he can relax his mind with music and theater.
Young people should spend their time on cultural activities or sports which depends on what type of them. I believe that each of them brings young people some benefits.
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| 2021-11-17 | nguyensarah | 56 | view |
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, so, well, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 1615.20841683 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 191.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65968586387 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29676501181 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 176.041082164 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528795811518 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 270.9 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.8730915394 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.9090909091 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388366861677 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159545723243 0.084324248473 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151755984021 0.0667982634062 227% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244372461739 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0926647182828 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 78.4519038076 34% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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