Children should not be forced to develop good penmanship since computers and other mobile devices have done away with the need for having good handwriting. What are your views on the subject?
It is considered by many that compelling children to learn the skill of writing is not necessary in today’s era due to technological advancements, such as computers and smart phones, they have to physically write less or not at all. I, however, do not concur with this assertion, and the reasons will be discussed now.
The primary reason to good penmanship is the development of hand muscles. When children spend countless hours practicing to write, it not only leads to acquiring a skill but also strengthen their wrists and fingers. It is imperative to have a strong grip to be proficient in motor skills in their adult life. Another reason is related to psychological effects. When children see their neat and clean writing, they seem to feel that they have accomplished something in life. In other words, having impeccable penmanship motivates children to work harder to reach success. Lastly, writing is an integral part of human world as typing has not completely taken over writing. There are various instances, namely filling legal forms or writing tests, where everyone is required to write. If children are not taught to write, they may face problems later in life.
By contrast, some people argue, it is undeniable fact that nowadays people do not write as much as they did in earlier times, because most of the contemporary work is digitalized and online, which largely requires one to type on a keyboard. So, children learning to write and developing a neat handwriting is a waste of time. However, they fail to understand that writing is an indispensable part of developing a proper understanding of languages. A poor handwriting is equal to speech impairment.
In conclusion, although some feel that it is not important for children to learn writing on paper, we cannot overlook the tradition of writing because it has been a part of human life ever since its interception. In my opinion, every children should practice to improve their handwriting since the benefits accrued from it are by no means negligible.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'practicing writing'.
Suggestion: practicing writing
...es. When children spend countless hours practicing to write, it not only leads to acquiring a skill...
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Line 8, column 82, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to write'.
Suggestion: to write
... is not important for children to learn writing on paper, we cannot overlook the tradit...
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Line 8, column 251, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'practice improving'.
Suggestion: practice improving
...n. In my opinion, every children should practice to improve their handwriting since the benefits ac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, lastly, look, may, so, then, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03846153846 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89204020931 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582840236686 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9577029979 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.176470588 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8823529412 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23529411765 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179488160136 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610720631683 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524658493157 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105090836975 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315024803478 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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