Several people believe that it is necessary for children at an early age to enter into their formal education, while others assume that after the age of 7 is better. In my opinion, I agree with the latter thanks to the following reasons.
On the one hand, starting formal education at an early age offers children a couple of benefits. Firstly, children at these ages can absorb information rapidly and effectively Thanks to their curiosity, learning new lessons will be full of excitement and determination. The second one is to form self-studying habits at young ages. This is because children these days tend to engage in the Internet like watching their favourite cartoons on Youtube for hours without getting bored. Therefore, guiding them to their formal education allows them to be less attracted dramatically.
On the other hand, I believe it would be much better for children to access their formal education after reaching the age of 7. The primary reason is that children may be more active if they are allowed to join in physical activities with their friends or caregivers. This can enhance the growth of the body and perception thoroughly, triggering their immune system and concentration. For instance, Japanese kids are not only taught necessary manners like respect the elderly but also be encouraged to play sports with their parents before they are 7 years old. As a result, Japanese adults nowadays are taller and have higher working productivity compared to those in the other Asian nations.
In conclusion, I reaffirm that despite the abovementioned benefit of allowing children at very young ages to enter their education, starting after the age of 7 can provide them with a better development cognitively and physically.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11188811189 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80835190678 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8844670751 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.461538462 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23064050007 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841608097621 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057968617287 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151182074356 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297791818778 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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