The charts show the population of some of the world's largest cities and the world population. Summaries the information given and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart show the population of the world's largest cities and the word population. The chart shows world population in Urban area will be higher than Rural area by year of 2030.
The population in Tokyo were approximately 16 millions in 1990 and will increase up to 29 millions by year 2030. Bombay population in 1990 were only 5 millions, but considerably increase up to 26 millions by year 2030. The Jakarta has it's population 2.5 millions in year 1990 and will increase dramatically approximately 18 millions by year 2030. There will be slight increase in population of New York 14 millions in 1990 to 16 millions by year 2030.
In considering world population, Rural population slight increase from approximately 2.75 billions in 1980 to 3 billions in 1990. There were steady increase from 3 billions to 3.25 billions from year 1990 to 2010. The population will remains same by year of 2030. There were steady increase in Urban population from 1.5 billions to 2.5 billions from year 1980 to 2010. There were sharp increase of population from year 2010which were 2.5 billions to 4 billions in 2020. There will be approximately 4.8 billion population in Urban area by year 2030.
In conclusion, there will be dramatic increase in population in Urban area by year 2030.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'shows'.
Suggestion: shows
The chart show the population of the worlds largest ci...
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Line 1, column 38, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'worlds the largest'.
Suggestion: worlds the largest
The chart show the population of the worlds largest cities and the word population. The cha...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...her than Rural area by year of 2030. The population in Tokyo were approximately ...
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Line 5, column 235, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'remain'
Suggestion: remain
... year 1990 to 2010. The population will remains same by year of 2030. There were steady...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ere 2.5 billions to 4 billions in 2020. There will be approximately 4.8 billion popul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.97073170732 353% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93981481481 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82156461061 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 74.0 106.607317073 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.342592592593 0.547539520022 63% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.5034273365 43.030603864 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.0769230769 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6153846154 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.38461538462 5.23603664747 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17354609828 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111530022769 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116367706934 0.0843802449381 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160687205955 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134477649717 0.0819641961636 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.26 8.06136585366 78% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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