There are some people who spend their entire lives doing the same thing, engaging in the same job and following the same routine. They might be intimidated from the change. On the other hand, there are some people who are risk takers and welcome change. In this essay, I will discuss both views and also give my personal opinion.
Living peacefully and with security inside the cocoon they are in is the habit of some people. They are real resistant to change and are adamant about their position. Moreover, they are impervious and stubborn; might be because of insecurities or own personality. Furthermore, they believe in status-quo and reckon that they might not well adjust in new environment. Also, being unsure about future, unsure about their financial status and daily life, these people avoid change and are not willing to change. They tend to oppose the change by every means they can.
On the contrary, some people are born rebellious. These people have this irresistible urge to change. They have amazing positive personality and view change as healthy, new way of life. May they get success or failure by the resultant change. These people have positive vision for life and believe in the movement and die for it. Even if this will not be the bed of roses, they go for the change.
To conclude it can be said that, this nature of people mostly is dependent on their persona and their psychology. Some think change negatively whereas, some view and visualize the bigger impact they can create in future and long for it. In my personal opinion, change is always inevitable and ubiquitous so that it is best to be risk taker and step out of the comfort zone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 215, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...n the other hand, there are some people who are risk takers and welcome change. In this...
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Line 1, column 313, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...ill discuss both views and also give my personal opinion. Living peacefully and with security...
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Line 7, column 244, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...create in future and long for it. In my personal opinion, change is always inevitable and ubiqui...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, well, whereas, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78620689655 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37306526741 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534482758621 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9052057281 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0526315789 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2631578947 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78947368421 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29024939647 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847047112045 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705026487392 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184449122035 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842170511942 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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