The bar charts provide information about various destinations like part time job, voluntary work, further study and unemployement of graduate and postgraduate students of the UK after completing their college in the year 2008.
Overall, it is clearly evident that both UK graduate and postgraduate students had similar destinations after leaving college. The majority went for further study and the least number of students opted for voluntary work.
It is observed that nearly 3,500 UK graduates opted for voluntary work which is in similar proportion to the postgraduates where 345 chose the same. Likewise, 16,235 UK graduates remained unemployed in 2008 which is in similar proportion to postgraduates (1,625 students).
A similar trend is observed in case of further study where the highest number of students from both graduate and postgraduate groups were found. On the contrary, a slight decrease in proportion of graduates (17,735 students) was observed compared to 2,535 students from postgraduate level who worked part time after leaving college in 2008.
- some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change Others however think that change is always a good thing Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 61
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development Summarise the informastion by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant write at least 150 words 73
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- Smoking not only harms the smoker but also those who are nearby Therefore smoking should be banned in public places To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledg 78
- Book 10 test 2 task 1 the table below give information about sales of fairtrade lebelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 68, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...rmation about various destinations like part time job, voluntary work, further study and ...
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Line 7, column 299, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ents from postgraduate level who worked part time after leaving college in 2008.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
likewise, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53048780488 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90363651255 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530487804878 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7773495901 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.571428571 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252414618137 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13201296377 0.103423049105 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687714286986 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171206986804 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423754421795 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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