Some people claim that museums and art galleries are not
needed today, because everyone can see historical objects or art works by
computer. Do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, the significant development of cutting-edge technologies has affected people’s lives irreversibly. Museums and art galleries are considered no longer necessary, as special historical objects can be seen easily on the internet. Although the immense spiritual value of these aesthetic buildings is undeniable, I strongly believe the government does not need to preserve it anymore.
On one hand, It is expensive to maintain museums and art galleries, and the government has to provide funding for these institutions. If national or local authorities allocate resources to keep these cultural facilities open, there will not be any available money spent on education, healthcare, and social services. Moreover, in this digital age, instead of spending long hours driving to the museums or art galleries, people can easily access historical information thanks to the internet. Consequently, enjoying cultural sculptures or abstract pictures from home could not only conserve the state budget but also save personal time.
On other hand, images of historical objects or art work on the internet could not provide people with real experience and feeling as seeing artefacts directly. Firstly, the buildings which house their collections are themselves part of people's tangible cultural heritage. Because museums store numerous prized possessions which could help people acknowledge their ancestor’s occurrence or illustrate the significant differences in social classes. In fact the feeling of awe on dinosaur skeletons due to their enormous size would be impossible to experience by simply looking at images on the internet. That is why it would be an immense loss if these artistic systems are closed to the public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, so, as to, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60984848485 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00418431409 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628787878788 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.7596036759 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 123.416666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214572097018 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734435482942 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828440600312 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143747851557 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235900481372 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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