Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
In this day and age, the importance of money is undeniable, a huge number of states claim that economic development is their most vital goal while some people think that the significance of every type of progress is equal. Personally, I strongly agree with the later statement, a number of arguments around my idea.
On one hand, there are several reasons why economic progress is considered the most important task. Firstly, the national budget could provide for residents a better quality of life . If a country gets high economic development, they could invest that amount of money in the country's transport network, education, healthcare,..., . For instance, the public could have better welfare, children could be provided a better education environment. Secondly, a wealthy economy results in more job creation, a high level of employment, and higher salaries for citizens. It can be easily seen that in many wealthy countries, the unemployment rate is really low and the amount of money earned per a person is extremely high compared with poor countries.
On the other hand, I firmly believe that the role of other types of progress is as important as that of the economy. To begin with, the success of a nation could be measured by looking at the health, well-being and happiness of the residents. If a country focuses too much on economic growth and ignores other types of progress, their residents could suffer from poor social service, for instance, poor transportation network, poor healthcare system. Therefore, that huge amount of money would be unmeaning if it is not used to enhance the resident's life. Furthermore, another key consideration when judging the progress of a modern country should be how well that country protects the natural environment, and whether it is moving towards environmental sustainability
In conclusion, even though the significance of economic progress is undeniable, other types of progress are equally important to a country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23974763407 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97437819376 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564668769716 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.0678510012 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.769230769 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3846153846 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8461538462 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296361835492 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972511297454 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106101343483 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20884714629 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696802226768 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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