The illustration shows information about how igloo is built from snow.
The given pictures depict how people use snow to create an igloo through 5 steps.
The process commences when hard-packed snow is cut by a saw to get is 3 (in) in width, 8 (in) in length, and 15 (in) in height. Then, large blocks are used at the base to form the igloo shape while the one that is slightly larger will be put on the top of the igloo.
In the next step, people use a saw to make the edges of the blocks smoother before placing them in a circle building upward. Simultaneously, the constructor also digs a hole under the igloo's wall to create an entrance. After finishing this step, those who build an igloo take advantage of a shovel's function to loose snow onto the igloo and pack the snow into all crevices. However, when smoothing the surface of the inside wall, people do it manually. Then, they shove out any extra snow through the entrance hole before covering it with snow blocks.
Overall, the whole process of building an igloo from snow is managed by humans with implements' support.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
...packed snow is cut by a saw to get is 3 in in width, 8 in in length, and 15 in in hei...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
...cut by a saw to get is 3 in in width, 8 in in length, and 15 in in height. Then, larg...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
...s 3 in in width, 8 in in length, and 15 in in height. Then, large blocks are used at ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 312, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[3]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...take advantage of a shovels function to loose snow onto the igloo and pack the snow i...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 826.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46486486486 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36002748495 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616216216216 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.4585817705 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.7777777778 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206684598203 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844754451106 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621515958372 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140459486735 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291971447199 0.0819641961636 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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