the illustrations below show how coffee is sometimes produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The diagram delineates how coffee is manufactured by a dry method
By and large, it is discernible that 3 main stages are seen from the production including drying, hulling, and roasting. Notably, coffee production involves 12 steps, starting with sorting beans and ending with packing which is ready to be sold.
In the first step, coffee beans are sorted manually. After that, they are cleaned with water in a sieve. Once the dirt is removed, beans are dried in the sun for four consecutive weeks. In this step, in order to dry completely, they are raked and tuned frequently. Afterward, the beans are stored in a silo. They are subsequently delivered to a mill to continue the production.
After being delivered, the coffee beans are hulled in a big pestle into smaller pieces. In the following step, the beans are filtered in a grading process by a bracket. Next, they are bagged to store and some amount of them are sent to sell in the open market. Finally, the dried coffee is roasted and packed for sale to retail users.
- The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 84
- the illustrations below show how coffee is sometimes produced Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features 11
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, so, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73888888889 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54754178294 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588888888889 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1427426738 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0833333333 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0735252382003 0.215688989381 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0248024788168 0.103423049105 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340695561575 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0589314381782 0.15604864568 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369391765922 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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