The bar graph provides information about the number of adults participated in various major sports activity.It gives us figures of every contributor in the year 1997 and 2017 and clearly shows that participation in both the year was fairly same for few activities and some varied extremely.All the numbers data is calibrated in number in thousands.
According to the graph, the number of maximum participants for their respective years was in Gentle Walking with 50000 and nearly 55000 each.In 1997 basketball is the least participated sport with 9000 members and nearly 16000 people were more involved in the year 2017. Similarly, Cricket is the least involved sports by adults in the year 2017 with a drop of 17000.Jogging and Gym are popular among both the years with fairly equal number in both the years between range 30000 to 40000.
Moreover,sports like football and hiking are popularly involved approximately 10000 more members in year 2017 than in the year 1997. Overall, Gentle Walking is the popular sport in both the years along with basket ball and cricket being the least favourite.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ew activities and some varied extremely.All the numbers data is calibrated in numbe...
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...alking with 50000 and nearly 55000 each.In 1997 basketball is the least participat...
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...s in the year 2017 with a drop of 17000.Jogging and Gym are popular among both the year...
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...etween range 30000 to 40000. Moreover,sports like football and hiking are popularly ...
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...otball and hiking are popularly involved approximately 10000 more members in yea...
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...volved approximately 10000 more members in year 2017 than in the year 1997. Ove...
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...pproximately 10000 more members in year 2017 than in the year 1997. Overall, Gen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, similarly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13333333333 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73919876543 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.0556958213 43.030603864 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 184.8 112.824112599 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.0 22.9334400587 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171721674871 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102355276914 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064233234417 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134573033252 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627590230655 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 13.2329268293 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.86 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 11.4329268293 271% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 31.0 11.0658536585 280% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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