Topic: What are the influences of the Internet on youth development?
Throughout the course of human history, it would be a huge mistake not to mention the Internet in the lists of groundbreaking inventions that human beings have ever devised in this day and age. Admittedly, the Internet has opened up a new chapter for mankind in general, and most importantly, it has had a range of impacts on youth development in particular, namely on their connection, insight, and opportunities.
To begin with, the emerging use of the Internet has formed a bond among young people. To be more precise, by means of the Internet, every youngster would be able to connect, make friends, or even socialize with others all over the nation and globe. It is such a miracle that the young can keep in touch with their friends even though they are quite a distance from each other. What is more, once the young have a chance to socialize with one another, they could also gain more experience, insight, and intriguing stories from their peers, which they could not have accomplished without the Internet. By socializing with international communities, youngsters will be able to not only enhance their usage of English but also learn to speak other languages as well, which is a precondition for the process of integration into the rest of the globe.
Second, with the assistance of the Internet, each youngster can gain more and more insight into every aspect of life than ever before. As mentioned, with the Internet, young people could contact and make friends with foreign peers, which means that they could inquire more about international peers’ strategies to study or work productively or simply have a better understanding of their perspectives on life. Moreover, it is expected that they could also gain more knowledge about different cultures and be more conscious of respecting them. To illustrate this, in recent years, there has been a sort of lifestyle in Sweden that has impressed many young people enough to decide to chase and design their lives in that way. It is "lagom", which means "enough". Additionally, a majority of the elderly acknowledge that the young these days are much more conversant with modern technologies than other ages. I suppose that this also has much to do with the influence of the Internet.
Ultimately, the Internet network has provided a plethora of job and educational prospects for the youth. With the help of social media, it is getting easier and easier for everyone, specifically the young, to seek an appropriate job, ranging from freelance to paperwork. Personally, I believe this, without a doubt, could decrease the unemployment rate and aid the unemployed in surviving in today’s society. What is more, the internet provides us not only with job opportunities but also with academic opportunities. By surfing social networking sites, it is easier than ever before for the young, especially students, to study their major via social platforms such as YouTube. In addition, it would also give the students a chance to become exchange students, who can freely study in another nation and have a better understanding of that culture as well, something that would not have been possible in the past.
By and large, I pen down saying that the Internet is one of the most astonishing watershed moments that human beings have ever been through, which has three beneficial effects on youth development: their connection, insight, and opportunities. Consequently, I suppose that the young must utilize the advantages of the Internet in order to become a better version of themselves, which is beneficial not only to the young but also to society as a whole in today's world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, moreover, second, so, well, as for, even so, i suppose, in addition, in general, in particular, sort of, such as, by and large, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 20.0 7.30460921844 274% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 93.0 41.998997996 221% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3056.0 1615.20841683 189% => OK
No of words: 604.0 315.596192385 191% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05960264901 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.95746018188 4.20363070211 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94341806834 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 282.0 176.041082164 160% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466887417219 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 946.8 506.74238477 187% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 16.0 4.76152304609 336% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.6763308424 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.909090909 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4545454545 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139285193073 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479678667243 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560814872818 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879512777057 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284761734505 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 78.4519038076 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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