Tourism today creates a variety of problems, such as pollution due to flights, traffic congestion and water pollution. Do you think that governments should impose extra taxes on flights or accommodation to restrict today's tourism industry?
In this day and age, numerous issues are asserted to stem from visitors and travelers; therefore, the question whether government levy a tariff on air travel or lodging cost or not remains controversial. To me personally, I firmly disapprove of the notion above since tourism is still of great importance in the modern world and justifications are as follows.
First and foremost, tourism plays an indispensable role in the economic development of a country, hence the livelihood of many people may be immensely influenced owing to the alternation of tourism. In this field, a wide range of job positions and opportunities is available all year round, which not only offers people with greater chance of getting a job but also contributes to the country's revenue. Some countries rely primarily on tourism such as Hawaii, Thailand may be heavily affected if the government imposes more taxes on hostel and flying costs. The more taxes it contains, the fewer the number of tourists is. Fewer visitors may act as a factor which causes the decline in a country's income. This explains the reality effects of taxes to the tourism field.
Another thing worth considerations is that instead of extra levying on tourism fees, the government should focus on enhancing hygiene system to deal with pollution matters. Both governments and citizens are highly aware of environmental problems when it comes to tourism activities. The number of buses and fuel-consumed vehicles can be diminished by using electric ones, such as the electric carts used commonly for travelers in Vietnam. Furthermore, not all visitors do harm to the condition of a country, some express attentions towards environmental concerns while the rest display ignorance about it. In order to not cause any negative impacts on the tourism industry as well as the country, the government should only fine people with inappropriate behaviors.
In conclusion, although tourism brings about many consequences to a country's condition, still it is controllable if the government together with the indigenous work out sensible solutions to the problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, while, another thing, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1778.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29166666667 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00446096901 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60119047619 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3821943973 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199154080227 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665703548852 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517931192766 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105336454704 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489307996356 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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