Write an email to the restaurant’s manager in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things State what problem you had with the food you ordered. Complain about the service Describe how you want the restaurant to resolve the problem to your satisfaction
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Rocio Smith and I am new around town. I have visited the Blackstone restaurant last Saturday with my husband and we were really impressed with the atmosphere, the decoration, and the live music played by the band. However, we were not as delighted by the food since it did not meet our expectations. I ordered a Rib-Eye steak and I asked for it to be medium-well cooked, instead I received a well-done Rib-Eye and it was really salty.
Soon after we tasted the food, we called the waiter to complain and the service he provided was awful. He was really impolite and did not want to change our order arguing that we did not specify the term of the meat. We inquired about you, but unfortunately you were not present at that time so we ended up paying and leaving.
It was really unfair as we paid $280 dollars for a meal that did not meet the quality standards we paid for. Please use this email as a formal complaint from us to you aiming to get a refund for the meal as compensation.
We look forward to your response to solve this matter.
Sincerely,
Rocio Smith
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 202.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49504950495 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53237056846 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59900990099 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7426345973 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5454545455 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124492971672 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044964156174 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440496161714 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717546382638 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296349633399 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.