Many wild birds and animals live in towns and cities. Some people think that the wildlife should be protected. Some think that they should be removed.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
The entire eco- system is run by all the species on the planet. It is thought by some people that the wild species living in urban areas and town should be removed while others think opposite and suggesting that wild life should be protected. According to my perception it is really important to save wild animals and birds.
On the one hand, A few people think that the wild creatures living in cities and towns should be taken off. Firstly, letting wild creatures to keep in cities and towns can be harmful for their residents as carnivores depends upon other creatures for food and even humans can be eaten by them. Hence, People must keep them away from the residential areas for the safety of their family and other people in the society. Secondly, Infectious diseases spread from some wild animals that might result in death of human beings. For example, Raccoons live in some cities which carry many communicable diseases such as rabies and also zoonotic parasites that pose a threat to human life and other pets at home. Finally, if wild life will reside in cities and towns it may harm safety of pet animals and birds that would cause lowering down the number of pet animals and birds living in residents.
On the other hand, I put forward the view that despite of some negative results, wild life should be protected for plenty of reasons. First of all, There are millions of species of birds and animals and every creature has its own contribution in eco-system as taking off one animal or bird will destroy the ecological chain. Moreover, A number of benefits are provided by the wild life to humans such as for agriculture, fisheries etcetera. On the top of it, many people do business by selling pig meat and other non- vegetarian food items that are provided by these animals. Last but not least, Animals helps in reducing pollutants such as some birds eat mosquitos and maintain the eco system.
To conclude, Although keeping wild animals at home is harmful in many ways yet i believe that life on the earn is impossible without the equal participation by all creatures.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74246575342 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39360817702 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52602739726 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2637968072 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.4 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372892972467 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126614058049 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116977731104 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22499823105 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105811951992 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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