Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my satisfaction with one of your tour guides who delighted us on the last trip. Allow me to elaborate on this situation.
Last month I have visited the Altay Mountain region where I jumped at the chance to discover the unexplored wilderness and learn more about the local traditions of indigenous people. Eventually, we were recommended to hire one of your guides named Mark Smith.
Deep down, I was not sure about the qualification of our guide but I was wrong. I derived a lot of pleasure from this journey. We set off to our trail at the crack of dawn and came back at the midnight. Never before have I had such an absorbing tour. I saw a lot of sights and tried samples of local cuisine. Mr. Smith was not only an all-arounder person but also quite intelligent and amazing interlocutor. Behalf of participants I would say, it was a great pleasure to have a fascinating tour featuring an outstanding tour guide.
I took the liberty of making suggestions to reward your guides, namely allow participants to express their appreciation through finance incentives via your site. It would be great to leave feedback as well as tipping for guides.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Helen Pr
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 203, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[1]
Message: The adverb 'Never' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
... of dawn and came back at the midnight. Never before have I had such an absorbing tou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78082191781 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89736732065 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648401826484 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3483182695 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.8 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267863245089 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720871605742 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068739861876 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133951331245 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386876511262 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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