Science can now offer people a life expectancy of close to one hundred years or even more. Some people view it in a positive light, but others believe it creates some problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Over the years, people have been dreaming of acquiring an immortal life, which supports them with limitless time to fulfil their wishes, owing to the innovative science. On the other hand, that everlasting life of human beings might have adverse effects not only on each individual but also on the environment. In this essay, I will discuss both perspectives and my personal opinion will also be appended at the end.
First of all, if humans were given a chance to live over a century, that means they would have countless moments to enjoy the time with their beloved ones and to accomplish their goals. Unlike an individual with an average lifespan who has a deadline in their life, they could learn life and moral lessons more. Moreover, many people believe that the world will be a better and happier place to reside in if there is no more grief and misery over the deaths of their beloved ones.
On the contrary, an everlasting life doesn’t guarantee that one will encounter with only good things in life. As they grow older, their health could deteriorate day by day, if so, they will have to struggle and depend on others for their daily activities. They need to strive hard to meet the demands, since their lifetime is more extended than others.
Besides, it will also have detrimental impacts on their surroundings. Considering that the death rates would decline, there could be over-expansion of the human population, and by virtue of that, the negative consequences such as poverty, shortage of food and water supply, accommodation problems or environmental pollution might be experienced in the meantime.
To recapitulate, there will always be two schools of thought whether having a metaphorical life is good or bad, depending on how people appreciate their ways of life. Personally, I think more drawbacks can be witnessed when a longer lifetime is granted to humankind.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 367, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...I will discuss both perspectives and my personal opinion will also be appended at the end. Fi...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lifetime is more extended than others. Besides, it will also have detrimental i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, moreover, so, i think, such as, first of all, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99059561129 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74282668793 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592476489028 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6501514477 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.461538462 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5384615385 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107915934241 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446586016285 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0262258819696 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0669687867624 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306359362959 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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