It is a good idea to fall in love in college. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Zora Neale Hurston stated that “love makes YOUR soul crawl out from its hiding place”. University is a place for people to find and define themselves, to build up the image of the person that they want to be, to enjoy life in the most authentic way. And love is an important piece of the puzzle that forms a person's soul. Personally, it seems obvious to me that falling in love with someone in college might bring many wonderful experiences to student.
The main reason is that college time is the most beautiful time in a person's life because it place between Young life and adult life. At that age, people are always in the highest spiritual state, and seem to be fearless. They can love, hate, be happy, be angry with the smallest things. As a result, loving in university is a perfect hybrid childish love and mature, powerful love.
Additionally, students who love while studying can experience more than those who don't because they can explore the magic of new experiences together. The research shows that couples love to share new adventures with each other and getting to create memories with fresh eyes. Therefore, as a matter of common sense, they enjoy more aspects of life, clearly feeling the happiness and suffering.
Nevertheless, from the point of view of the economy, some people believe that love is a potential danger for studying because they will spend too much time with their boyfriend or girlfriend without thinking about their studies and their future. As a consequence, they will be wasting their potential, and love can wreck a person’s education and destroy their bright future. However, the love power is stronger than that, and love can invigorate people and encourage them to study hard. College can be stressful, challenging and difficult, so having a lover in college teaches they how to be supportive, caring, less selfish, and to help each other through academic difficulties.
In conclusion, although falling in love when study at school has two sides which have different merits, it can also be a wonderful experience that brings something new and exciting to one's YOUth. However, the problem is that students need to know the balance between love and study to achieve the best achievements and create a bright future. Therefore, they will be ready to love and be passionate about their YOUth without regrets.
It is a good idea to fall in love in college. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Zora Neale Hurston stated that “love makes YOUR soul crawl out from its hiding place”. University is a place for people to find and define themselves, to build up the image of the person that they want to be, to enjoy life in the most authentic way. And love is an important piece of the puzzle that forms a person's soul. Personally, it seems obvious to me that falling in love with someone in college might bring many wonderful experiences to student.
The main reason is that college time is the most beautiful time in a person's life because it place between Young life and adult life. At that age, people are always in the highest spiritual state, and seem to be fearless. They can love, hate, be happy, be angry with the smallest things. As a result, loving in university is a perfect hybrid childish love and mature, powerful love.
Additionally, students who love while studying can experience more than those who don't because they can explore the magic of new experiences together. The research shows that couples love to share new adventures with each other and getting to create memories with fresh eyes. Therefore, as a matter of common sense, they enjoy more aspects of life, clearly feeling the happiness and suffering.
Nevertheless, from the point of view of the economy, some people believe that love is a potential danger for studying because they will spend too much time with their boyfriend or girlfriend without thinking about their studies and their future. As a consequence, they will be wasting their potential, and love can wreck a person’s education and destroy their bright future. However, the love power is stronger than that, and love can invigorate people and encourage them to study hard. College can be stressful, challenging and difficult, so having a lover in college teaches they how to be supportive, caring, less selfish, and to help each other through academic difficulties.
In conclusion, although falling in love when study at school has two sides which have different merits, it can also be a wonderful experience that brings something new and exciting to one's YOUth. However, the problem is that students need to know the balance between love and study to achieve the best achievements and create a bright future. Therefore, they will be ready to love and be passionate about their YOUth without regrets.
- Should college students fall in love or just stick to studying This has been a controversial issue for a long time Some people argue that students should fall in love while others point out that student love is harmful From my perspective I strongly belie 78
- Whether college students should fall in love or not Some people suppose that it brings bad impacts on students However in reality having a relationship during university time can bring more advantages such as improving mental health and boosting study mot 78
- In today s world of advancement and development students can choose their favorite major from a variety of options which can serve as a basis for the future Critics of this opinion are of the belief that the subject programs of ATC students at Banking Aca 56
- Student love is often beautiful and romantic it becomes colorful memories in student life Some people believe everyone should experience love during their time in university However falling in love doesn t play an important part when YOU re in college bec 73
- Love is a necessary flavor in life and no matter how beautiful or painful it is it is still worth cherishing and keeping And college education is the most beautiful YOUth of all student love is extremely beneficial since it allows students to grow up have 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Line 4, column 94, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'places'?
Suggestion: places
...tiful time in a persons life because it place between Young life and adult life. At t...
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Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ying can experience more than those who dont because they can explore the magic of n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, while, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2035.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 416.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89182692308 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5601570957 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545673076923 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6214134532 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.75 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325409538805 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115467927994 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129230842229 0.0667982634062 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208727385385 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.169140859255 0.056905535591 297% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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